Input Output: What do I do?

Ok. I've read all of the very generous comments and I see a common trend. People want to hear about that time I moved to Indonesia. Well, I feel the same way Camille does, it was so long ago that I wont be able to remember everything so clearly. However, I will eventually write an essay about it but it would need more time. Perhaps one of the later essays? We'll see. In any case, I see what Dan was saying about how coming the moving to the US story is but thats not really the point of my essay. I'm talking about rebirth and a new start. Perhaps I should not mention what country I move to, I think I can pull that off, we'll see. I think I'm pretty set. I know how the structure is gonna be, I just need to figure out the transitions. I still have to refine the particular scenes that I can remember, but they may have to be composite scenes. Don't worry, I'll let you know. PLEASE let me know if theres anything else I can do.